tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28875475.post115710485366155326..comments2020-06-13T13:53:18.071+00:00Comments on Mortal Ghost: Chapter SevenLeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13770069472552779217noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28875475.post-44185052085590854622007-07-26T17:57:00.000+00:002007-07-26T17:57:00.000+00:00Jesse's Christlike nature was apparent to me from ...Jesse's Christlike nature was apparent to me from the first chapter, when he healed the bird, but it resurfaces here in the scene where he is not harmed by lightning. The quality of writing remains at a good level.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28875475.post-84587756441810040292007-04-22T16:38:00.000+00:002007-04-22T16:38:00.000+00:00Hi Lee,I am really enjoying this story, and am gla...Hi Lee,<BR/><BR/>I am really enjoying this story, and am glad that I don't have to wait a week for the next installment.<BR/><BR/>I have linked to your story here oon my blog: http://lifelongreader.blogspot.com/2007/04/at-minute.htmllifelongreaderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03948361464417064330noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28875475.post-1157565714925815042006-09-06T18:01:00.000+00:002006-09-06T18:01:00.000+00:00The plot thickens...and keeps getting better. I lo...The plot thickens...and keeps getting better. I love the way you slowly introduce the characters and the paranormal aspects of the story.Bibliophilehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10960676264710788969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28875475.post-1157423049813519462006-09-05T02:24:00.000+00:002006-09-05T02:24:00.000+00:00This is beginning to take on the rhythm of a Gospe...This is beginning to take on the rhythm of a Gospel-- that is, a kind of slow spiral up through deeds of power and teachings to some kind of climax when the spirals have wound tight. Jesse=Jesus? In any case, Jesse's a healer and a master of the storm, and a believable character all in one. That's a feat in itself.<BR/><BR/>Sarah, Meg, and Finn all have their wonderful supernatural qualities as well. <BR/><BR/>I look forward to more spirals.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28875475.post-1157400385495675182006-09-04T20:06:00.000+00:002006-09-04T20:06:00.000+00:00A lovely, elegant flowing read. I enjoyed this cha...A lovely, elegant flowing read. I enjoyed this chapter very much.<BR/>AddyWilfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15255247027469318384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28875475.post-1157302222583831702006-09-03T16:50:00.000+00:002006-09-03T16:50:00.000+00:00You are playing with us a little here, I think - w...You are playing with us a little here, I think - what is real and what is not - an excellent way to maintain interest. <BR/><BR/>The watch was intriguing - just after I'd dismissed it as 'all in Jesse's mind'- and I loved the 'pearly as the inner skin of an onion' - excellent observation.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28875475.post-1157272867021079202006-09-03T08:41:00.000+00:002006-09-03T08:41:00.000+00:00Excellent Lee, it gets better and better. Can't wa...Excellent Lee, it gets better and better. Can't wait to turn the next page!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28875475.post-1157207091193473602006-09-02T14:24:00.000+00:002006-09-02T14:24:00.000+00:00I agree with skint and Michele. But I really enjoy...I agree with skint and Michele. But I really enjoyed the conveyance of the storm. <BR/><BR/>I also concur with Michele about the tasing nature of installments - mind you, being on a par with Dickens can't be a bad thing ;¬)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06280161801824435219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28875475.post-1157136629635420292006-09-01T18:50:00.000+00:002006-09-01T18:50:00.000+00:00skintwriter has commented on the exact piece I wan...skintwriter has commented on the exact piece I wanted to comment on !<BR/><BR/>I also want to say that I've remembered why I never finished listening to the radio play version of <I>DOmbey and Son</I> - I was too impatient for a weekly serial version. Each Friday seems a long way off from the next one !Michelehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15888298679182871669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28875475.post-1157132251702117582006-09-01T17:37:00.000+00:002006-09-01T17:37:00.000+00:00Wow - a very important chapter I think - first tim...Wow - a very important chapter I think - first time I've been actually excited by a piece of writing for a long time - thanks. <BR/><BR/>This passage reveals a lot to me about where you're coming from: <BR/><BR/>" ‘I think you already know that words, powerful as they are, wonderful as they are, can describe only a very thin slice of our reality – some believe, make our reality. Whatever I said would conceal – distort – more than it would convey to you.’<BR/><BR/>But still it is words that you have used to do this, very clever.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com